Script analysis for Deborah's workshop

Plot ( Based on my imagination)

Time: December 2010

Location: an abandoned warehouse in London

Characters:  Miss C and the scientist

 

She, AKA Miss C, is the head of this terrorist organization. Today she obviously loses her patient when her underlings tell her that one of the best nuclear scientists in this country is caught. With the launch code in his mind the government has to provide anything she requires, to save the people in this land. The script starts from Miss C tortures the scientist in order to get the launch code.

 

Subtext

“He is sweating. Hard. She stands impassive. Unconcerned.

He rubs his wrist and we see he is chained to the chair. ”

This is the exposition at the beginning of this script, indicates the atmosphere of this scene, nervous, he knows what she wants from him and no matter he says it or not he won’t be alive. She is a cold-blooded woman and wants something or some information from him.

 

“Are you sure you wouldn’t like a drink? (smile) Never too late to change your mind.”

She seems talks about drink but in fact she is sending the information to the man to tell her what she really wants. She smiles in this situations is a signal of her personality—cold-blooded.

 

(Afraid) “ I swear, I swear. Please. Stop. Please?”

He is very scary and desperate. Maybe he doesn’t know, maybe he can’t say.

 

“She (Placing a briefcase in front of the chair) Shush. Be quite quiet. It will no longer be necessary to lie.”

There must be something fatal in the briefcase, like poison needle, or chain saw. She loses her patience and prepares to take action.

 

“I have here a malac. God it’s beautiful. Could you hold him please? Man steps out of the shadows and forces he’s hand horizontal.”

She seems very skillful for doing this, and she is not the only one, she has an underling around helps her.

 

Treatment

 

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